SKS Model Feedback
Stop
Stop making some of the paragraphs too long and crowded. The ideas are good, but breaking them up would make the reflection easier to read and give the page more white space. I would also try not to bring too much research into the Description and Feelings sections, because these parts should mainly focus on what happened and how you felt.
Keep
Keep using the Gibbs Reflective Cycle because the structure is clear and easy to follow. You explain the experience, your feelings, and the positives and negatives well. Keep linking your ideas back to the driving question about how technology impacts education and us. The research also supports your points well and makes your reflection stronger.
Start
Start making the Description more focused on the actual experience before bringing in research. In the Feelings section, you could go a bit deeper into how the experience personally affected you. You could also make the Analysis more critical by explaining why these impacts matter for students and teachers. It looks really good and follows the Gibbs structure well.
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